【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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5 R/ _! Z) C+ }) E! x* i7 G我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# {( z% L$ j, U) A  M0 n* K( r+ GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* Z- M+ V6 X0 a7 Q! A9 N3 LI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 o% E% p. j  q2 ^Love… just the word love
# {4 H+ U5 b" oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 G/ T6 k+ t9 v9 M1 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ m5 R: U/ z! }2 e6 }  ^9 T( O3 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 v& h1 U% A: i# T2 h1 dEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! s2 f! G  g* }! C) c2 HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% z9 B- t0 ?' o# _$ B  ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 k7 g9 Y! [3 JCan I entrust it to you?
3 n+ r( g' d% B% KEntrust my love within your heart
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# T  K& E6 Q$ O2 }6 i0 [# b- {7 d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. P. }; D" P* ?3 B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: F+ m9 U( W* v! Q% m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, ]! Z, f* {! ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" s) q; ~$ ?$ l8 F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 L3 h- Z9 S) m& G5 K9 Q  l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" {' B7 v. d7 D' D% V) h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# H% M/ L$ t& G% C# n& w7 N, u3 r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 n  n# J9 _. q9 ~0 L6 f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: y, {+ ^' m5 s! c* X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; y$ X0 J* Y8 g. p7 q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 j4 I  k6 E0 l; j0 H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) z7 i* v3 }' \5 B( m" R<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% t; S" H7 n! L' [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' ~. B3 Y5 X* T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: f: j# h" k% Y% Q/ [" i, J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. V; v) v9 z1 J9 C# v# s, e) q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ T: P' h2 I5 [8 n7 a5 C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& ^: D$ k3 l- ]& d# H! z, C# ~. Y  N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- j( o# K- @4 z* @# S& \( f" [* R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 p  G8 l$ t1 S6 C5 S3 a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) p' Z9 ^' a- K% L% ]. ]3 e<P>But I never did </P>
+ y, j; A, D6 p" M<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# j' _+ U8 C' Q9 U" {0 w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 F$ N9 ?" H6 g8 ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 N; @( Y) k4 @% ]$ c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, j7 d4 u( i" h7 e- u+ D+ ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 Y' Q2 m: C" \/ p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, t1 f3 X6 x+ x2 m. j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& q6 R! a- x9 I6 P! m. b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ z7 m% l1 i# `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) r4 \5 d3 i  {3 F8 Q$ y7 `1 _" z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>