【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 M5 c% \0 c/ C' l( G/ x' g2 G我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 p% M- l2 a( M0 x6 u8 IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 b# ~5 O( |3 {) l: H5 XI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% u* @% x6 C) L$ Q# ?; s, nWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 O, O9 m  ~# c+ Y6 X; hI want to confess that I love you,
. r( \! b1 I2 M$ l# H: T1 GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ J, V' t# Y$ \: kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 S' R3 t) l2 ~8 V% AEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! l1 F- j8 @' p4 r- X' \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ P4 V  d: |5 B2 r4 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, k; [* c1 j- |3 q& W4 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# W9 [3 o" q* n0 {* w( ^: |Entrust my love within your heart
' f1 c1 \# Z, t; J0 d! RCan I entrust it to you?
3 K: s( S. y- UEntrust my love within your heart
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; K" j& a& ~0 L5 q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ p1 a* {. U  A% O* F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  z: d: x9 m0 l/ i! i# U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% ^3 t9 s* M/ h) [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! L* ^' Z4 ]$ z9 p' W5 Z& m<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  S0 y6 k7 n  @% A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% C4 B/ w& |' b2 Q: I5 d- P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 F  B' I8 O+ s; H- Z; X* H0 h4 J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: P# l4 d, r+ }2 |  @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- C5 I, F1 s6 U2 X4 Q0 \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 n! ?( n9 [) f2 S<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% `# c8 |: J3 Z+ g4 `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 o3 ^5 X' j' b+ @. s; ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ T5 r* k+ i& P+ Q3 Z* k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- l4 c; Y7 r' O* B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% j0 \  I) j+ c5 G0 l  e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( j% m  o4 u9 l5 c+ w! Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! J; j9 k  Q8 M$ N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" ~5 I2 P. p' W" y2 @" c  P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" s7 ^& t4 d0 N+ N5 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 j: M" I( s: M. k# h' u! I: S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 K  p' r6 }: B/ @! I" ]1 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# k- C3 [- q: h/ B- U, a1 c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' N0 O5 @8 {9 X* h- F/ f* L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 `4 `1 [7 v# `9 ~<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% p5 M  h' h4 s/ [8 y  c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( [/ [, P! f/ v7 l' k0 J这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ g9 u, X9 N9 O' T! Y' U# {2 M$ q2 H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 e6 ]9 u. ~9 h: d2 Q  Y! Q+ b4 l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>