【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
& ~( g; ]8 c7 [2 N1 Y9 P$ WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ ~1 y* K# i* ]) K3 z/ AFrom the first moment we met,
; f( m5 [) g& AI already loved you with all my heart
4 r, E* y9 T! N% D4 QWe meet and talk everyday,
, {$ Z8 Y8 f0 \2 a  H9 sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" M, k8 ~7 F# i8 cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: j9 g# w9 x- f2 _9 r; GWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 c+ ]) Y4 T5 y) LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 j- j7 o. n+ [' C+ e# E' S6 gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) F1 l% @2 @, d' \; a& iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ ]( v4 W; I% x3 q3 UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! ]/ `) H* w4 V, t2 l3 c. L; SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ K. {( L7 d* N. B  XIf today isn’t too late,
- r+ g, E: @' m* LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 `7 y0 `- d  o. F7 bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( [1 I  B6 [8 V- ~" Q: E; Z  v! vCan I entrust it to you?
- o- ]" h+ a1 r; C+ t- M) r. {$ lEntrust my love within your heart

7 p% c4 u* w# B9 N/ T+ b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 f+ p- E7 h. ~9 c* u& R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, A, p- |$ S$ _5 {9 S<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 Y8 L9 b5 I; M5 w  Q- z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. r9 O  w0 d$ U7 }% Q4 X. p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) `) Z( d  Q- U# B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, f( m0 O6 Q4 X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 L* Z* z2 V+ p/ @+ r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: L% M, S! ]; V  V<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 g7 z% K* {* t  Y3 ^* _/ ^" `; ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: q& e+ Y0 a8 I1 q1 e- x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 g9 |/ K& Q$ u4 M  L<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 O& V# u& [9 G" t/ G& w<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ z7 I7 K( g2 }' y) M  b, t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 v& y) l, c" q$ }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& C: `2 c* O; n2 [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- W8 |2 r0 M) N$ P6 a( Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 i# m  h2 V$ W7 h  D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* w- R) h9 ]( p$ T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# G3 N3 G9 g4 M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 O  b& C  R1 J/ p- \0 f  N4 F0 D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 u- s# E4 q6 Q& ?8 q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 R5 h# A( k1 N9 k  G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* ?! |  Z( u/ `8 I" _- A' J' j; G% F+ _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- ]  r! ?  H8 X/ {9 w/ H3 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 y2 [: C( M; g4 I2 j9 n8 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 {" }# N% P$ _. H: i, j5 P+ ^% L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 q  M+ M+ T+ K$ |4 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 |& g# s4 [( Q6 K8 E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: l+ g7 g7 }) x5 q' G9 T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 I  I$ L2 g) K2 w) G) p这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- L- e/ l* N: Y5 s  @& [$ k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. @* t1 o* f% T: [- q2 r2 S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>