【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* D) X8 R+ L, B& \; BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% p) B; t: O# L+ ^" g( \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. a' E- I( O6 X( e, W" w* N5 I/ l+ @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 @( e1 g5 [3 R! R; O% yIf today isn’t too late,
% z9 ~5 |7 r& [: u1 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 J* D  N2 I" p8 V. X0 RLove… just the word love
+ P4 u# F2 T6 V2 N6 u" MWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 p0 F9 X9 Q% O( J4 R; MI want to confess that I love you,
) U/ u' j) r  t* I( P: {- ABut I never did
  D$ E/ ]! E1 }/ L6 ]8 t4 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 y' I) n; @2 K/ @" B6 UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ W' F# L( w7 N1 Z& b, ?Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

. l% H, c# w: f/ k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% l/ @- N8 C" ^9 N" r9 L0 B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: j, Z& y. t) m* p; K2 K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, k( A  X! l3 G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# s6 y; @% Q  d3 |<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ i5 I4 S( x9 P0 u" [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ U% n3 Z* s* F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 q" M, M9 U: T: @0 o0 d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( m; o0 ~* h: R" q9 m+ X9 J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ |  Y# ]3 R2 C% X+ q" |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 ~2 b( m) C8 \5 @! B7 y7 q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ ~5 T! v+ M  }7 Z. X3 e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ _0 C" P2 g' ^% u4 K' }7 W% c* i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 u6 A, w! y" b9 Q7 R5 U: I9 U<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 G) @6 l$ X8 z9 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 b! k4 R5 X$ u& l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 p5 L; m, a$ l6 g0 x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" T: |$ m$ H5 u$ D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, ~- C& O  d1 X, P4 z! z7 Z4 o# n' h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  f8 _1 D1 U$ o$ o: G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 j# Q& ^, ~" X2 C, X* O4 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; t% T; r. j3 `6 w- d9 a8 y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 D. P+ R/ m2 `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 i% O8 U+ W1 z4 L/ f$ o* J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>