【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) E+ x  h3 q: y3 Q5 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, a$ r: d0 B/ i7 r3 K" k0 [I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 Y0 ?& K' k0 T; VIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- z5 t- b5 O+ w* |I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 Y& f5 R7 W2 V) `# U* I% OWhy is it so difficult to express?
  q! F: ?5 n: D7 `, h' sI want to confess that I love you,
& q) v4 k( g( i; {+ o5 M3 W; vBut I never did
1 y3 P3 @* ~& p: W) M! vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ r5 C4 I9 J, ?/ m( ?: QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  N0 v# G* c# V. lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: U/ z" V2 K* }  i. _2 hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ i  @  t: i/ B+ ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ ~" D: h" a) l! LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

4 Q5 X4 Q# S: P" d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- J5 H- R) f: }0 r* A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( L. E4 n6 A" n/ ^6 E7 O. C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( s( W" N& r6 Z* r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 J, k& D4 D2 R, y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" f8 l' q1 A5 G9 G0 `) D" T" u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 q+ R2 c5 W0 F& M; J5 W& N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* |: y. A+ \: M& A" A6 x$ @! m7 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ m2 G2 e, Q. U<P>但我不会</P>
0 S  R2 J8 j! T$ _& i+ Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# [3 b4 h! m1 G; h* H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 o8 J0 s5 B: M8 Q* W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, I/ a! n1 B! W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: O6 ]; P9 G  ?8 w% B% r3 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 B# ^& s5 p  t: L7 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 O* t, {6 @; m: e0 y6 s0 e3 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: f/ X, b& U% A1 d% q( [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 ^; g% e, W( H4 ]' x0 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ P' J8 _: @6 K+ R9 b; I, @0 N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 U0 D: R0 E+ D2 G  l8 L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 O- |' ~9 O, Q( |9 b# f0 j9 t3 ~<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 t, V3 H2 U7 D$ y9 v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ B( P  q1 B, I; f. Z  _8 r- R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% b: ]5 k& n8 H: W0 {% y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' }" b3 l0 `9 A# P: k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  W. m: {5 o1 c6 Z* j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 K4 F0 B* R. r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>