【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 b" i  s: _; }' a- r# w) aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ~1 U- W/ J3 O8 X! NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# q6 c- A  m4 A( I: MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ I" b8 {, d. W. ^( _, r- fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& l. M( `+ x4 u, n" C% `% @I really want to know just how much you love me
; W- y+ z6 z6 O1 f3 r0 d9 ?4 |8 H  MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. I* t+ I# Z( p1 Q7 b' [" b, d4 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 F% ^! ^- |) k5 s7 SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! P- a$ y) e+ Y' {/ f; p! y$ z( t& lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 i. l( ]# c' ~3 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 U3 L0 r" U0 X) b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, C" ?$ p' R2 D8 u8 r+ t! v: p' O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) Z( i* K& |1 W- ~$ |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# D, L: u* Z) f5 m6 b. q* n  ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' Z  |: @7 A* v7 ^" V! z) Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 |7 W8 _) r# p4 @' ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 D4 x2 M5 T5 b) _- h4 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# [  e; Q; s% }2 O' w: ?- B$ b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 _/ ^" a7 {; n! [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" c/ L( U% j# d+ g3 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 ]- p4 l6 y" _8 W8 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 V# H; j+ o. i$ W$ h: C" V4 q3 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 T$ y% G4 ~; _4 B6 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ u7 u2 _9 L/ g% p+ J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  D' \7 l0 D2 }" b3 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# ?0 g: V( u; w: s$ L' G# g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 \7 o: B2 Y. r/ v6 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* b! e+ u& S% X* ]9 z1 k- [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' o% g: w5 Q4 r" g8 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; l) @3 e  c( i/ Y  q8 v( E1 _5 |( t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) q+ d- ^+ r/ f# ?  V) m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* ?# H- N% m( y- a, A- {# P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 _! m7 B# S9 e! g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 A+ |; p! _6 `0 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 G4 j' d' R3 t, F, ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 B0 N* T! }+ ^& k" {, V! H2 u) O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ y$ X' F# ^$ e1 N1 D. O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ Q( ^' g" d& R9 m% c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>