【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  D: D/ ^! d0 c% V5 a  i4 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) R+ t* a5 L1 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; E4 o) n% q+ n3 L& e# q5 p" hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ D' F8 w2 ^2 t; {5 S" e+ |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& Y1 ~; Z% X/ A! F% zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, i* }5 x/ o' I9 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- Y$ G8 y5 A' J9 c8 D; xNothing can compare to my love
* J: ]3 G/ A3 B/ c/ v. _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& z9 S8 u8 V" T9 _0 L' W/ mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 E: j' Z' H0 n3 b$ dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 j; Y+ _; w4 \  e* O2 i- BI’m still filled with fear
; v9 r9 S$ x  D1 M2 }9 p+ XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 ^* ?0 x; C5 S' \, fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 q9 H2 o# {  A; G+ `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 L! M* i% U8 R$ g: c6 }3 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! x* B' e  l0 @: `6 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 [, E9 l$ V( S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 }9 H8 X* Y9 |6 x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 X6 q2 W: w/ e& Q/ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, S. A) s  k5 R" Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' d$ |8 q& @/ U# G( {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ R, m& u( E0 F; k+ y; e( h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ |& V  A' A. n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# q, q/ |" p+ Z) q) N* |+ z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. H; U2 ~# Z, J$ x9 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- A2 Y9 N' B- _" T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" P+ {( h% Z7 ]4 b# {2 j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" {9 e; w+ d1 v( I8 Y: B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% L: d2 u. B' p& d* V: e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" `* H( Z# [  H1 S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; N9 I7 [# W* a6 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 I( T8 W$ n0 o$ s0 I: w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" K; e& G2 K& N/ u1 i& i1 s# X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' R/ q  r+ X9 e. E  z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 E# a' h& q* _' W1 W+ p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: r  o: Z5 S; H6 X! z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>