【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 w/ o: K  F3 T* U* XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* M3 {0 p2 N; _3 e2 I  L" W+ l- a) vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' b5 Y4 a0 w& c( CYou needn’t fear anything
1 L/ V( w7 v1 f. @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 j: ]6 z9 e* G, z% d' U( f+ y! c7 ZEvery other word you utter is love
9 m4 ~) R; }1 p$ qI really want to know just how much you love me
, V+ _3 g, o! R4 O. ZI love you I love you with all my heart
- M! |; k8 v+ v+ l3 k- [1 QNothing can compare to my love
) \7 l# r6 m! T+ `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 C, I9 ^/ P) F) P" aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( S/ o, G( D: N% cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 C9 i9 H! y! Y; x+ x5 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( a' ^- S) p  r& I& ~! |1 MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& a% e: x! @2 G4 J# q9 S7 ?# p; NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ j- E6 u) ~' @+ k# K6 }* [: O; nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; p1 i$ }6 A* K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 w8 ^( C" n- `8 P* O6 }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 X0 q: r% S6 i$ W! N  g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ N4 s$ S' ]9 O& Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 ^4 W2 a% F5 F9 i0 O1 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! O. G8 o- |; Z; o: L2 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- @0 \" ^+ u% B# f$ d/ O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ }  |9 c, |7 ~4 o- ]* k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  ^/ p6 `) g$ C" s' V* E, l0 B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 M% ^% r; ?! o& |( P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 f) ~/ x( }- \1 m  \) Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# e$ r% Z% {. B2 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; E+ f0 w+ B: N" a0 a$ _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  X0 Y- d- t; r. Q) `; O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 A- j3 `% P& v! z- s& b; \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 Z- ~6 t- ]  B* o% P' n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# X* ~$ e: E, V  R" L( ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  I- a2 A2 z( a, z& r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ [/ g2 x! h: {7 J' m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 Q5 D" ^. k9 g  g0 g. k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 V/ n& V+ z: i' c, W9 w* ]7 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  C6 U) r& e" M* o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ l1 p% e/ R9 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>