【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% I1 [6 u) {- ~$ v歌词我附在后面。
+ U# E8 p  @& N1 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) F. A( B; s$ ]4 B; D  oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# X5 H5 L' q- A# oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- q) ~& Z/ B* K  c! vThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 N+ ^( M& x5 V, J% K+ \With the moon kissing it every night
" x5 O- e) h1 B' E3 s' {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 c$ Z# j- b- d$ m" c% J2 [, ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 d4 E% B6 i0 _+ A/ J3 {- uEvery other word you utter is love
6 ~6 U) R+ D' ]6 a8 eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" E, T; }  ^8 x1 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- ?7 L" x  V1 X7 Y& t$ S( wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# t4 |! X8 _# k2 k: ?! i8 zI’m still filled with fear
$ t  v9 s8 ~4 |+ ^: u7 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ h2 b$ R& H) e4 e$ kI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! r, h0 R. |2 `! I$ q3 e* h- QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 f% N) h( R$ X# F! T, Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* W  a. I: l9 k9 T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% a; x! S2 C- w; e! X: N# o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& u  A5 X3 v# H. Y. Y' W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( g, e, _8 }4 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 N* o$ |: b& z1 E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' m& g2 T: ?) T, Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ {$ J0 G, \: j, R! ^7 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 @6 U" c  M/ [" H0 `. ^4 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% M2 G. B+ n* j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 s5 [% J% [; V# e4 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) h6 n# I, b. u9 z8 h$ K/ h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% p5 ^9 U5 a# e& y' \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& K3 t' G. |4 M) N  c* R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% t( d: O% ?: v# I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* Q' e! g& J9 o7 T1 X6 p6 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 T: `+ C+ e+ B0 U0 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 o; E8 X  F2 p- o$ ~8 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 |) y* c8 P  K6 Z+ n. k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. d) `1 K" K5 {8 Z! S4 L* [  Z! a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 F+ f0 \4 m: c/ H# r# l1 g" M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( \, E+ M& j0 n# W6 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' K7 O$ ^9 k3 T9 f& q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 \) r3 Y4 ~, F( E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) H2 G0 P: d3 \+ |$ Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* e$ b) c& L4 F% K. I) V* N0 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; z9 K1 Q* V4 q, B( T# A  E9 p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 a) I5 C  Z1 Q; L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 A# A* s! u# ?2 w/ J; I. V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 v9 ]( U- ~2 M" @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 S" z' i$ c3 H7 a( K+ l8 }7 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ y6 C7 z) w& N2 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>