【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- i/ m+ L: D$ M9 N5 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 |, O$ R  |  ~9 W" Z/ T* sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ g$ g3 n, }1 D$ ~7 a( a+ j! X- J! P/ MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' {# W0 z$ e* v4 TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# _- x! B) d, c  W7 ], }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. u2 \9 w( ?9 i8 P8 J, f) hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 ^/ R4 x) B/ ~3 X/ j8 B+ T/ nI want so much to see inside your heart
" W/ U3 z5 [( ?9 G5 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% V) w, w; a$ \5 L- S. n* {! P8 H- ~I regret not dying
. q: ~' G" T# iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# V: C  o; w! h; CWith such a tongue as yours,
6 j4 f) A' C: R- E, SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# i1 t* _9 n( l( UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( Z( S$ U+ g" l3 l7 ^- T& a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ P+ O/ v! J  e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ l  \) g* o! t, w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( B$ c( r5 I  I- C/ H6 `3 X/ ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 a* |/ z9 J$ x$ H# a& @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 h/ ]0 o* x+ r9 d% ^2 H/ T! T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; J' G( c% S' F  l- P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* F) A7 G7 d4 O0 g0 i. g( J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  n* Y( y4 P) T  b+ c, _& U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 m& Z; t% l' w7 r8 P$ i. {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 j+ q/ `* g9 r3 n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. h$ ^3 Q& ]8 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) L- K! _) c' P2 P' T, E9 P4 }! ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 q4 Q/ }/ U5 o3 U+ L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* \3 Y/ Z. I1 K+ v. u- c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* s2 M; t8 F( k' T% z7 `' G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" w" H" B- v/ R$ c  ?' d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( a2 ^7 P( e# M% H4 ^3 E3 m( d9 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! l: h* o* |6 Z  x2 N) p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ E6 }  o' D: p% h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. Q. r/ s! n  @, R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; B. {6 n, A) ^/ Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 o, \( M6 z% v  X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 n5 \3 b" k$ ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 r# v1 H+ s. E* d  s. N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 J5 E! f) H, i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) ~' j4 P$ ?# d3 l% ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! v# i  q7 h: T" Y8 T& Z! X0 [3 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ r0 A7 v4 w* j) G8 z5 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 S( r6 A8 ~. _' g$ ^( B% P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 e* L3 l6 U' J! e1 I! ^" }" O8 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>