【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ M; g* A, g$ \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* p6 t" U0 @3 m9 M6 `With the moon kissing it every night
1 D6 r' j6 f8 o+ c) ]Seeing the sky content with its love
  [$ M% ^2 k; E2 E4 B! iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  R. o- s. Y* D. ?! J1 `1 R2 ?% iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( r- ~% N8 |9 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% R# F' f7 p$ }' ^6 E* `" `  a( VI love you I love you with all my heart
/ r# r* v& f( P3 N) B, UNothing can compare to my love
7 m  _0 F6 l0 w. V+ H" NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" [0 a* w: A0 y! K9 V$ p7 rI regret not dying
- Q: D3 Q" I+ K! h/ U9 u8 X- zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# K$ ^* j, U/ o' d  [; @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& L. _9 r8 y8 M# B' g9 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 N+ t! O6 a4 D; Z) k5 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# Z, f" w% D- a+ n1 `8 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ s$ `* ~2 l+ l2 v& `8 M* v6 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 d, y1 J& n8 @* ]( M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 V: p" `0 S1 w+ Q. G! j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: j: q8 T6 z$ }$ }  Q/ G7 M. j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 L/ r4 r- z' y) S; O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 a8 G9 T3 P# L( v' t# a6 |* l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( _: o  z% _& s" q% y9 X9 L, z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' s& L7 ]: _9 q, |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 d- P# @6 W/ c4 X" j/ [+ ^% P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, w# B# a& ]4 ~. [7 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& [' J! y! I) _3 D9 A) r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 G" h5 a: X% S8 X+ y( Q4 \7 A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, t7 x3 ^. A1 m; V9 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 \6 ?+ c) x( R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 A9 A0 I* }2 H$ M: s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 |! ?- o! t* D- j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 K1 j) j4 c: V9 a0 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" X3 C/ D, M2 K, m& ^( r7 v* M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! t0 p8 k" }# P5 o! I: f% P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ U- T0 G8 M. x. m# X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 e; z# g* J% t7 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# d+ P0 k1 ?$ P$ V  U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. N$ Q0 E8 U4 A8 X1 \( B$ ~5 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 W; Y: t8 Q" F' O  [! e2 }1 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! F& `+ M! X9 N  Z1 L7 `' a3 h  o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ b& B  B. \7 I$ ^( P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 W" v) P+ B3 \7 e4 G# e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: K. C, E( k9 b# h# ]4 l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- O! _+ ^) t5 z- @7 d) L& M; q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ M2 v+ T3 x' q: G( e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ g  `( v, m  o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* W- B6 @8 E; Z0 U( ?1 [0 Y8 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 o  ^9 X: N/ {% p# F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' {$ P' f1 S$ s9 j. t8 @8 n" X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

  Y/ P8 Y/ o& \* I/ d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 d, J# c6 R: x4 H+ V% L+ Q. ~8 u7 K! k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>