【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: N4 u$ i# L7 ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  i. p* S! j0 O" f1 o: lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* u$ J# h( O6 I& y* {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ ~% {/ O& G1 c( m' ?3 jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 q9 C; Z3 [. S8 l" k1 E4 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 d! u+ S* X, ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 V' t! ~1 W7 EI’m still filled with fear
: N$ I& b& F; \; T& _$ s! B3 h7 }- `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% ~: Z) ]5 X$ S# g! l7 _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! m6 Z7 k7 X. j0 D2 gWith such a tongue as yours,
' G3 E! K! }9 F$ k- kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, c+ a5 |) Y' e# t: ?2 t4 C! z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. Z" k/ c% X3 P3 T3 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ W: n5 q; t7 R+ Y3 U9 u" k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' W+ `: V! X+ C/ I0 B4 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& K4 a8 G' `1 q& s! P0 R0 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 w' t. w5 H4 F8 D, v( _3 u" N9 H* C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 d$ n# Z' l7 \2 m7 i) x3 P9 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ]  E  j  t$ _9 Z/ K9 V/ G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 U, Q* V9 x4 E- G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& P; D% z5 F: \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" A; y) [4 ^# d+ R( a$ z% v<P>你无需担心</P>
) N5 j2 {8 G1 I/ n7 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" E7 v/ l% c8 ~( s8 _: e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* k+ \: N7 r, k# A) w$ ]. q; H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 Y1 w+ k: o; I& m+ n- u, J+ D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; |) a+ g( z+ ^( p7 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( F3 L( u8 M) k% O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# P6 i% e6 y- i% R3 b5 S8 t, a; f  G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; X3 M# ~+ i5 |& Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' ]- K% `& R2 W: T6 |& g: J- m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" Z* }/ W) P; M- n8 N+ J: f4 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ y  ~! _% ]5 A" T7 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# H- R) |' g) h& Z0 I! j# H) h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 H/ C: T( V) f, y$ V9 i1 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 j% e% W, a9 s5 D) b# Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& p5 p2 n6 v! O+ Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 P! J, e- `& ?! H- l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 C9 ^8 e! ~, b& a/ \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 X' U' L, {' ^/ e) }+ V9 i! @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" ]. P  f$ s; }7 j% e0 e7 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ n) h4 j1 H# m5 _+ G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 u0 Y- D+ c7 h9 Z3 n5 ]5 C) x2 V9 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* A2 h& ^/ O# d- V! W4 W8 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>