【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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( F; c  @  l- v$ aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
0 @+ ]# v" M, E6 }: w我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
5 L. E9 n( |8 W1 j6 ~; I) e4 ?I already loved you with all my heart
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9 d$ I6 t( Q, c1 [# {在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

  {/ Q) E( {5 V3 Y- A/ HWe meet and talk everyday,
2 r7 W" }+ F) L' o2 [But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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8 t- l+ n3 a2 Z  l2 u8 x& \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ L* A# m& d- W! xI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
' q: Q  i* v- L我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
( A0 e4 u: B1 P) vWhy is it so difficult to express?

9 N; h0 B% }' ~3 R愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

0 F* u$ K1 f$ D: y8 ]愛你 想要告訴你
  z7 M% _' R7 v- T, g卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
9 |/ @) @4 n# i- T9 ~你將從我指間滑漏
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' H0 j% m# t% s6 t) B- l7 tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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9 Q- s: d5 I7 \8 d& k5 V1 @) z希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

& J8 x8 `3 n* J( L3 ^) P! P# H- W3 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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- o( d6 D  F: Y* S$ w+ _) @2 M不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 |8 _" Z4 t$ M! m9 ]: h5 c1 c可否讓我托付給你?
( `6 W4 p+ T" h+ l托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
3 S( n8 a& W1 G+ C  u! YWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
" C" n* Q1 q3 t1 u/ H7 d& d為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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; ]) E) M; A8 T0 R7 Z3 P愛你 我想要告訴你
: r* z, d. V0 g  ?# r卻還是說不出來
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" k' Y4 P. ?0 p, c+ B1 z9 cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
! V  G8 T( S8 ?% _- R你將從我指間滑漏

7 \. s; a# N$ ?$ aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
) Y" o, I5 I, o! d& O6 I" ^# B+ s讓我向你表白
! _! H1 E2 b" R8 d我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
& L/ d. S. b/ |+ bEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
# d; J# ~# G9 c: e. f' T托付我的愛
. d  l4 [. t* s收在你心裡

8 Q! m  p: t; Q6 @Can I entrust it to you?
& K4 a2 ^; J' GEntrust my love within your heart
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0 j$ {; a( }! Y+ o6 l1 q可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿

* A9 ~; Q6 f, Z/ I4 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

+ v4 m3 G- H6 J皎潔月光下
  u' ?# O: R; e天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
$ K  h  P3 ~  M' R/ q0 N5 @我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) w: D& Z7 t$ X2 H) m+ uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. I& k9 ^) J* @0 `0 fSeeing the sky content with its love
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1 O, e: w& |) z& s" z0 ~8 s1 {2 v月光映在我的眼底
& F2 y, Q) z+ l8 R4 M% }月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
" X: Y1 r4 p! @! {星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
% V: h$ Z. ]2 o; K& B* e' V0 y害怕我們的愛
+ H4 L- W! R& Y9 J終將逝去
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/ ?( h) p3 k+ @; BYou needn’t fear anything
" X: R. G  X. [1 Z7 ?) Y% I& ?# dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

3 {/ X# i( R, ?7 s/ p) c. o; w你勿須擔心憂鬱
/ m! X" c/ R. C4 t+ G我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
& _* |; j- A" \- u! R  S! x- rI really want to know just how much you love me

你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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/ V1 k" K. b; T" b  h* \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

' U) y4 A2 m6 d/ H  O" MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 l! D) v; }7 w8 J/ l  x( N整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart
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, R  ^  ^; Q' I  V1 c我想看透你的心
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7 H: _1 W' ~! }+ [# x8 s8 VI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

6 |1 h# i/ M3 m  e; c% k我歡迎你將它打開
' w1 ?5 @% |9 v1 Y  K我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
9 }2 P- }# z+ [2 P1 g你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
( _/ g3 k* E4 i  h; X# {It’s nothing close to 100,000
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1 n- |6 v3 o: v0 F, S; ~: _" C可惜我未能以死證明
/ F& {7 u) \7 O" B% F& D3 f我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
, D4 N+ x7 @$ Z你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love

! p9 E4 u, z" S+ f訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

8 p# W9 X7 L, j8 C' {% O  `是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒